customers to make more money.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 7 May 2020
customers to make more money.
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Hi Anya, this is a great description of the evil shoemaker. He doesn't sound like a very nice person at all. Do you think he will be very successful if he was rude to his customers? I don't think I would like to buy anything from him.
ReplyDeleteHi Anya, an excellent character description- Why did you choose the evil shoemaker? I like how you went further than describing the way he looks. This is very well done Anya.
ReplyDelete-Miss Pownall